Overall is quite nice. The character position really fits the image of the song. But there are things can be improved.
The text. I think the colour usage is a bit awkward. Perhaps adding stroke would be better?
Also the background, there is a clear "boundary line" between the blue and the orange. If you can blend those colours so they fuse smoothly, I think it would look better somewhat.
But again, that's only my two cents. =P
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