Not a bad review, but a few things need fixin':
1. It's spelled "write". Just thought you should know. On that note, it's probably a good idea to proofread, or to have someone else proofread your work for you.
2. Flesh out your pros and cons a little more. Lists are good, but a good review's primary goals are twofold: to inform a potential customer about a product, and to help someone evaluate a product without actually having to buy it. This is, more or less, the most important part of your review, so flesh it out a little more.
3. Try justifying your score a little more. After reading your review of the pads, it seems like they deserve maybe a four or five at the very most. If the pad is overly heavy, comes with a flimsy bar, required you to use a solder gun during your experience with it, and comes with shoddy pad lights, why did you give this is 7/10? What makes this "a damn good buy"? |