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Old 01-13-2007, 12:33 AM   #8
Ętheros
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HA! Xbox. you make me laugh...
Talking

Shone is a word.
Also, I liked it, but i do think that it ended a little abruptly. you gave plenty of details in the beginning of the story, but when it got to the point, it seemed rushed, and even somewhat lazily written. I have this problem as well, i will write something really good, and towards the end i get lazy and try to finish it as soon as possible. I would go back to the end and add more details, but toher than that, i liked it !
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