Delirium*
it sounds not at all really delirious... i don't like your pad at the beginning... after that it gets better... you're right that is a terrible transition. Where is your percussion. Why is it hiding. Bring it out, add more of it, you need more than just a kick. Compress it or something, make it punch.
Oh, and your ending was... not one. Give the song a real ending. And add percussion. Melodies were cool though. |