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Old 10-26-2007, 02:11 AM   #110
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Posted a new pic up on my DA and portfolio...

Radio Gosha :: DENY A MONOCHROME FUTURE :: The Portfolio of James Franzen » Blog Archive » New picture, Dust Dreams

Hope you guys like it. Woohah~!
Compositionally, this is freaking great! I keep getting drawn to the figure and wishing it was a little more than just a 2-dimensional outline, though..specifically right around the bend in the knee where there would normally be some sort of overlap, but it's an honest outline of a sillouette. It wouldn't bother me that much, but you DO have some sort of overlap/foreshortening in the wrist. Maybe a little more detail in the outline of the figure itself would help it too? You'd have to see for yourself, maybe I'm just being overly-critical.

I'm doing my best to find little things that could be improved, I hope you don't take any of this as negative feedback on it
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