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Old 12-17-2007, 02:15 AM   #15
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My iPod was stolen, and I wrote the following. Also, I normally don't write about what I feel, really... I never write about my emotions, cause they tend to come out mediocre, but this is the first time I decided to keep a poem based on what I felt, and it turned out really good:

Anger

Once things go wrong, with anyone
Everyone involved becomes blind
Blind in any and every way

Your actions foreshadow pain
Your lips, to have them deny all that you speak
Your fist, to damage from the outside as the body absorbs it
Your eyes, those violent and fiery eyes, are so exposed
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