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Old 01-22-2008, 11:29 PM   #4
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i am not sure if what i hear is correct but it is up to peoples opinion

High above, from my pain,
Tears fall down, like the rain.
Can't you see, it's a part of me.
My whole life, seemed complete.

All alone...
With no hope...
(I cry out...
Make it all...disappear.)

High above, from my pain,
Tears fall down, like the rain.
Can't you see, it's a part of me.
My whole life, seemed complete.

All alone, in the night.
With no hope, left inside.
(I cry out, can you hear?
Make it all...disappear)

Am I wasting all my time,
Believing someone is waiting for me?
Is it a dream, or (a lie)?
Sometimes life just passes by,
Your eyes...

[note: all the edits i believed to be are in parenthesis]
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