It never occurred to me that poetry could be constructively commented on when you're on the internet
I wrote a few things for a literary mag so maybe i could get some feedback before i put them in?
My home is in the Highlands
In the hills and glens
In the forests, lochs, and Cairns.
My home is in a quiet village
Covered by a sea-borne mist
Empty of people
Who still know my name
And hope,
That I will be half the man,
The legend,
That I’ve chosen to live up to.
And thousands of miles away,
My home will always be close, and no one will ever see it like I can