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Old 02-28-2008, 05:41 PM   #5
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Hey, listening to this finally now that I'm not all sick and stuff.

The kick is too deep/muffled or something. It's not punchy enough it needs more compression on it I do believe.

I love that bass. In fact a lot of the synths you use are fantastic and sound wonderful. Great use of stereo imaging.

There's a section around 4:40-4:50 that could use a little cleaning up, I think it's mostly due to the kick. Seriously that kick is buggin me It's mucking up the bass/sub range a lot when there is a lot of sound going on.

With the type of bassline you are using also, be sure you are sidechaining the bass, I can't exactly tell if you are or not.

Overall the song was pretty good. I got a little bored at times, though. You could fix that with some dynamics to the leads (add chorus at points, change note length, add a phaser, something)
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