The bass is out of key
What you have for the bass line is: B C# G G#
To stay in key, what you should have is: B C# F# G#
Your arp is also out of key, as is a lot of other instruments. Try following the key of the song when you write your synths.
Overall the ideas are there, but you definitely are gonna have to sit down and spend a good amount of time getting everything to actually harmonize together.
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