tosuzen -> totsuzen
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I can say you are prettier than you were yesterday, anytime
| I think this sounds more natural as "I can always tell you you're prettier than you were yesterday", or somesuch. Also, nemurikata is probably actually better translated more literally, "your [usual] sleeping form". Same basic idea for the azayaka ni irozuita ... lines.
Anyway, these look pretty good overall. Thanks, you two!
Last edited by -Miz- : 07-12-2006 at 08:32 PM.
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