There's something about the percussion you use that I've never been a fan of. It always has (IMO) a bit too much verb on your cymbals and hats, and that combined with the fact that they lack expression (you don't vary the velocity of any of your beats) makes the drums sound far worse than they could.
That being said, I really like where you took the piece. Some really interesting progressions, and you've definitely got the hang of the vocal stutter very nicely. Really quite well developed. I'd love to hear some dirty distorted bass from and actually electric bass in there as well- that sort of thing can really liven up a mix.
Nice job- this is the first piece of music that I've heard of yours that I really enjoyed (no offense meant, of course). |