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Old 10-19-2008, 12:49 AM   #8
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Huge fan of Umbrella, so I had to listen

Off the bat, something about that arp/pad chord progression in the beginning I found really annoying. I don't think its out of key, just that the sound is annoying. The feeling is mutual with the bass sound and with the other gated sounds you have. When the chorus/main track comes in though, things start shaping up a little better. I like the synth melodies and the nexus pluck a lot, although I think the piano could be turned down a little (or maybe have less reverb? Dont know exactly)

The track itself isn't bad, but some of the sounds are really lackluster, and the progression doesn't really go anywhere. You have your sections and breaks, but it all leads to the same place. Youre playing it safe for lack of better words.

Good stuff regardless, although you should see how you can find some better sounds and maybe put a little more progression in the track.
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Last edited by The Chemist : 10-19-2008 at 02:33 AM.
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