First thing I'm going to do is bash you on tagging this with both trance and techno; they're (generally) mutually exclusive and mistaking one for the other makes EDM fans cringe, haha.
As for what you've got going here song wise, I'm liking what's going on with the melody but not the chord progression; there just isn't any and what's there is boring. The melody could turn into some nice minimal, though.
Besides that, not too much to comment on I'm afraid.
P.S. You're leaning more techno than trance. Techno can drone on for a while, but trance has to have a progression. |