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ANGRY ABOUT ENGLISH · 07-24-2006, 03:02 AM

Grammar. Grammar would be FANTASTIC on your part.

Also, sticking to one point so you don't sound like a lobotomized hippie with ADD can't hurt either. You went from Disney's Rave to a badly-punctuated Strawberry Shortcake to ITG2 praise in one long run-on sentence.

Editing, as well, is helpful. Multi-posts are frowned upon by most everyone here.

07-24-2006, 03:02 AM	#46
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