Bleeding Luv ~Immorality Act~ /Xephia (Tatsh + Yuta)/beatmaniaIIDX DistorteD/Japanese

[津軽]

首筋に触れてきた
君の長い指先
戸惑いを隠せずに
胸元に心は引き寄せられた

この恋が報われぬ 恋だったとしていても
君に触れた瞬間 今までの恋が嘘に変わる

止められない感情が 頭の中でうずいてる
壊れるくらい 抱きしめて欲しくて
そばにいて欲しいよ
耐えられない 僕がここに居る

切ないほど泣きたいほど 君の手から逃れられない
互いの素肌を暖めあうように

涙色のドレスをまとい 一人眠る夜に
君が惑わさせていく

切ないほど 泣きたいほど
切ないほど 泣きたいほど

君が惑わさせていく
僕が惑わされていく

Translation (rough):

It mentioned neck muscle
The fingertip where you are long
Without hiding confusion
Heart was drawn to the chest origin

Having assumed that it was the love to which this love is not rewarded
The instantaneous present love which is touched you changes to lie

The feeling which does not stop the eddy being in the head,
The extent which is broken you hold, wanting closing
We want being inside
I who do not withstand stay here

It cannot escape from the extent your hand which ardently the extent which is not would like to cry
Way to warm the mutual skin

In the night when the dress of tear color the mark it is and the one person it sleeps
You keep making bewilder

The extent which ardently the extent which is not would like to cry
The extent which ardently the extent which is not would like to cry

You keep making bewilder
I keep being bewildered

[kannazuki]

Machine translated? And in any instance, the japanese lyrics are probably transcribed by ear so accuracy might be a bit off in terms of that.

Romaji
Kubisuji ni furete kita
Kimi no nagai yubisaki
Tomadoi wo kakusezu ni
Munamoto ni kokoro wa hikiyoserareta

Kono koi ga mukuwaremu koi datta to shite ite mo
Kimi ni fureta shunkan ima made mo koi ga uso ni kawaru

Tomararenai kanjou ga atama no naka de uzuiteru
Kowareru kurai dakishimete hoshikute
Soba ni ite hoshii yo
Taerarenai boku ga koko ni iru

Setsunai hodo nakitai hodo kimi no te kara nogarerarenai
Tagai no suhada wo atatame au you ni

Namidairo no DORESU wo matoi hitori nemuru yoru ni
Kimi ga madowasasete iku

Setsunai hodo nakitai hodo
Setsunai hodo nakitai hodo

Kimi ga madowasasete iku
Boku ga madowasarete iku

[ellipse]

I like this song, so when I'm on a computer that displays the Japanese lyrics, I'll attempt to translate it.

(It's gotta be better than Babelfish. . .)

[ellipse]

What the hell is up with the login system? It's like it doesn't want me to post.

The problem with the Japanese lyrics is that it doesn't seem to condense nicely into an English song. The translations are simply too damn long. Thus. . .kono uta wa madowasasete iku (this song drives me up the wall).

I'll try to work out some sort of compromise.

[ellipse]

Part of this will be literal (someone else can try to make it more poetic). The rest will be lyrical. So, here goes. . .

Bleeding Luv ~Immorality Act~

You touched the back of my neck
With your long fingertips
I lost my bearings
My heart dropped down to my stomach

This is my reward for this love
As for this love
When you touched me
This love changed a lie (I don't think this is quite right, but I can't think of any other way to say it)

(A/N: The next few lines will sound like a song)

These unstoppable feelings confound me
I was broken by my desire to hold you
I want to be next to you
I can't take it, being right here

This is all the pain I can take, I'm about to cry
I can't escape from your touch
(A/N: I will NOT translate the next line. Let's just say it has something to do with naked bodies and warm contact. I'll leave the rest to your imagination)

What is this tear-stained dress doing here?
There's only one person sleeping here
You baffle me

This is all the pain I can take, I'm about to cry
This is all the pain I can take, I'm about to cry

You baffle me
I baffle me

(end)

To give an idea of what I think is going on. . .imagine you have a brother. Now imagine you just slept with his wife.

(I'm pretty sure I royally screwed up more than once, so if anyone wants to correct me, feel free!!!)

[津軽]

Song/Video discussion- that so TOTALLY makes the pairing in the video offical. Good going, MAYA, getting the point out as them with the song.

But I still wanna know that last line.. :O

[Onipa]

Wait what is the pairing
I always assumed the song was about two guys
Thanks for the translation ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

[Max_300]

Originally Posted by 津軽

Song/Video discussion- that so TOTALLY makes the pairing in the video offical. Good going, MAYA, getting the point out as them with the song.

But I still wanna know that last line.. :O

Hahaha. Yay.
Can't wait till you record the combo miss.

[Max_300]

Originally Posted by ellipse

I will NOT translate the next line. Let's just say it has something to do with bodies and warm contact. I'll leave the rest to your imagination

Awwwwuh why not. D:

[津軽]

Originally Posted by Onipa

Wait what is the pairing
I always assumed the song was about two guys
Thanks for the translation ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

Well, the video WAS two guys (Licht and Killer)

Maybe I should make a thread for these two before I get killed for talking about this video like <3.

and Max_300, this weekend. <3

[ellipse]

I'm not translating that one line for two reasons.

1. I'll probably mangle it BADLY.
2. It's pretty nasty (think Injection of Love nasty)

Given the "tear-stained dress", I'm certain this is between a guy and a girl. ("Kimi" is used by men to refer to women, IIRC)

(As for that video. . .that REALLY pissed me off. Doesn't Killer deserve better?)

And a question, TC: Where did you find the original Japanese lyrics? That line involving the dress has something that's confusing me. . .

[津軽]

Hm. I see. That's rather odd.
When I get to learning Japanese, I'm going to try to email MAYA about the video. I'm very curious about it.

Well, I got the lyrics off a Japanese fansite with the video. The little bit I could read seemed like the song. When DJT's OST comes out, hopefully it can clear up a little.

[Max_300]

Originally Posted by ellipse

I'm not translating that one line for two reasons.

1. I'll probably mangle it BADLY.
2. It's pretty nasty (think Injection of Love nasty)

Given the "tear-stained dress", I'm certain this is between a guy and a girl. ("Kimi" is used by men to refer to women, IIRC)

(As for that video. . .that REALLY pissed me off. Doesn't Killer deserve better?)

Well... I'm pretty vapid about that kind of stuff so it probably won't bother me but I see where your coming from to keep other people from ripping their brains out. lol

Good point there. I'm not that good with japanese so... hmmm.

If the video PO'd you don't look at the fanarts. xD

[ellipse]

I've seen other fanarts. . .what are some of these people ingesting? Seriously?!

(though there was one rather funny one that portrayed Licht as straight)

I'm assuming the lyrics are correct, but it seems odd that whoever transcribed the lyrics did it like that. I'm getting this OST, so I hope it clears things up.

[ellipse]

I got the OST twenty minutes ago, and there's a rather large error in the lyrics. I can't type the correct line (stupid computer), but I can highlight the incorrect one:

耐えられない 僕がここに居る

Unfortunately, the line I don't want to translate is correct. . .and as for that tear-stained dress. . .seems like the singer is WEARING it (the kanji is provided in the booklet). I think I lost my faith in humanity. . .