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Greed[Book in prog.]
Old 12-20-2008, 11:15 PM   #1
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Post Greed[Book in prog.]

I though id jus throw out the intro:

The interrogation room. I never thought that I would end up here... The walls, solid white and very plain seem like they are closing in as the seconds pass. I was in here waiting for an investigator. I am able to see through a window that is disguised as a mirror because of the bright lighting. The seat i am sitting in, the desk in front of me and the seat on the other side of the desk are the only things in the room besides me.
The door almost disappears into the wall if it wasn't for the knob. It swung open almost jumping out of the wall. "My name is James Willson, and I am investigating your case" It's funny because James was dressed like one of those detectives you see on T.V. shows. His black suit, his red undershirt and his black tie all came together into an outfit. It reminded me of how my brother used to dress.
"Im going to need your information first…" He pulled out a blank information paper. "Alright, lets start with the basics. Your name, your age, your phone number would be first" He clicked his pen and waited for my response. "My name is Ryan Woods and I am 35 and I don’t have a phone"




What do you think so far of the book from this?
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Old 12-28-2008, 10:06 PM   #2
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I think you should write more of the book before asking for feedback.
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