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Old 03-06-2007, 10:10 PM   #1
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There needs to be a writing/poetry sub-forum in here. Anyways i'll start off with one of mine

As She Speaks

As She Speaks
She drifts into the night
Gibberish Tongue
fills the air

As She Speaks
Colors fill my mind
I walk but I go nowhere

As She Speaks
I fade away
Into a place
With gushing fluids
and pools of gold

As She Speaks
Words come our
I cannot comprehend
But I understand perfectly

As She Speaks
I listen
I look her in the eyes
and thrust myself into her mind
Beyond those eyes
She's crying
As She Speaks
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Old 03-07-2007, 07:43 AM   #2
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I have a lot of poetry, but they're all downers. Nice poem btw.
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Old 04-22-2007, 05:33 PM   #3
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::Poem//Motivation::

I can say I'm not lost
It's a fact I'm not common
I look behind me for reference
I look ahead for hope and a blessing
In this life there is always a minimum
If I am ever to find a maximum,
It is then when I should find myself wrong
I never knew of one without a priority
I face life every day with a heart
I live without a purpose and yet I make a difference
Impossible, a word that shouldn't exist to anyone
If I tell myself I can, then my possibilities are endless
If I allow myself to achieve, then that is what will happen
I believe I can, I know I can, I know there is nothing to stop me

-Luis A. Gomez
3.23.07


edit: Roses are red, lemons are sour, spread your legs open and give me an hour.
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Old 04-28-2007, 12:05 AM   #4
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Was planning on entering this in a local writing contest but missed the deadline. I generally don't like poetry but this one seems to work, despite the somewhat archaic grammar.



Beautiful Insanity

My true love’s left me today.
Flash, bang, out the windowpane.
A beam of light across the sea,
Never to return to me.
The many miles away she lies
Is smiled upon by heaven’s skies.
Any God would not allow
Such poetry to take a bow
And leave the stage it played so well
To send a poor man straight to Hell.
The only way this can be right
Is if the Lord has taken flight,
And left the mortal world alone
To suffer as Satan condones.

Oh, why does He allow such pain
To penetrate my feeble brain?
Why are life and truth and love
Scorned and shamed by up above?
To love and lose gives more to pain
Than any man can self contain,
Where only Lucifer controls
The mortal fools and desperate souls.
Simple pleasure unattained,
Pure contentment so distained;
If all of Earth exists this way,
Man won’t live another day:
Sending prayers to the sky,
Tells the world he’s said goodbye.

Desperate men speak poetry,
Such beautiful insanity:
God is dead if love is gone,
So am I once day is done.
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Old 05-06-2007, 09:18 PM   #5
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Was that written as someone else's pov because the she threw me off.
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Old 05-08-2007, 06:33 PM   #6
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Was that written as someone else's pov because the she threw me off.
Does it really matter? Gender is an easy thing to swap anyways.
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Old 05-16-2007, 02:12 AM   #7
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Usually when I write, I get one of two responses from those who read it... it either makes them sad or makes them think... sometimes those are one and the same.
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