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Poetry based on theme.
Old 05-16-2007, 02:22 AM   #1
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Default Poetry based on theme.

The idea here is, we start off with something and other's continue the work in a relevant form. If someone writes of the darkness of night, then you write about the blindness of day, that type of thing. Please don't write if you don't relate.

What will be?

Who are you
when the time has come
when all else is done
everything is numb.
When all you know
has solemnly gone
the darkness of dawn
in the silence of song.
Who are you to go
when all that you know
in passing so slow
yet parting with glow.
When do we know
if what is, once was
dishonest, once trust
if it was truly because.
Who will you be
when losing it all
when all that you love
suddenly hits the wall.
But more importantly
who will you be
when there isn't a call
and nothing happens at all?
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Old 07-06-2007, 01:18 AM   #2
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nicey! I liked this thread.
im not very good at writting but i ll do my best :3


where would be?

the right place..
the right moment, where night will raise
and we will see the midnight skies
covered by stars, and full white moon
a shooting star, which is a tear, for all those lies.

where would be?
the place to be free?...
where wounds are healed
where tears are sealed.
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