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04-20-2008, 12:23 AM
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#1 | | //bemanistyle::[Member]
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I wrote this song when I was having troubles with another forum (not bemanistyle). The lyrics are deep, and the track is in production. Quote:
[Verse 1]
I came in, friendly, peacefully
And U made a huge scene, bitchy, hit me
I have been brought down B4, not fun
But now, this ain't the same guy, hon
Pick Ur fights, wrong 4 rights
B prepared 4 an X-cruciating journey
Go on, boy, hit me
I will show how much you are a bitch 2 me
[CHORUS]
U cannot do nothin' 'cause I'm unstoppable
U cannot break me 'cause I'm unbreakable
U cannot move me 'cause I'm unmovable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot sue me 'cause I'm unsueable
U cannot kick me 'cause I'm unkickable
U cannot hike me 'cause I'm unhikeable
[VERSE 2]
U think I'm lowly, I will go bitch on U
U don't even know, all the shit U'll go thru
If U try 2 stop me, U'll get beat thru
Cannot kick me, because I'm unkickable
Cannot bitch me, because I'm unbitchable
Cannot hit me, because, I'm unhitable
I'm not here 2 trick U, just 2 know U
I'm not here 2 bitch U, just 2 show U
I'm not here 2 shit U, just 2 go U
I'm not here 2 whore U, just 2 FUCK U
[CHORUS]
U cannot do nothin' 'cause I'm unstoppable
U cannot break me 'cause I'm unbreakable
U cannot move me 'cause I'm unmovable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot sue me 'cause I'm unsueable
U cannot kick me 'cause I'm unkickable
U cannot hike me 'cause I'm unhikeable
[BRIDGE]
All of U are just shootin' blanks now
U ran out of ammunition, son of a bitch
U want to burn me, U can't, no flaming
Take my pride, my pain my dignity
I wanna rape Ur self-respect
And shoot the shit out of Ur mortality
But knowing me, I'll be invincible
So, come on, try and ban me.
[CHORUS]
U cannot do nothin' 'cause I'm unstoppable
U cannot break me 'cause I'm unbreakable
U cannot move me 'cause I'm unmovable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot sue me 'cause I'm unsueable
U cannot kick me 'cause I'm unkickable
U cannot hike me 'cause I'm unhikeable
[CHORUS]
U cannot do nothin' 'cause I'm unstoppable
U cannot break me 'cause I'm unbreakable
U cannot move me 'cause I'm unmovable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot do me 'cause I'm undoable
U cannot sue me 'cause I'm unsueable
U cannot kick me 'cause I'm unkickable
U cannot hike me 'cause I'm unhikeable
[ENDING]
U good 4 nothin' bitch
U good 4 nothin' bitch
U good 4 nothin' bitch
U good 4 nothin' bitch
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04-20-2008, 05:22 PM
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U isn't a word
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04-20-2008, 06:49 PM
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#3 | | //bemanistyle::[Member]
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Originally Posted by The Chemist  U isn't a word | What modern R&B artist actually spells out "you?" I kinda got my inspiration from "Son of a Gun (I becha think this song is about U)" by Janet Jackson.
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04-21-2008, 04:21 PM
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#4 | | .: Trance Music :.
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Originally Posted by Tetris What modern R&B artist actually spells out "you?" I kinda got my inspiration from "Son of a Gun (I becha think this song is about U)" by Janet Jackson. | The question is what American citizen spells out the word "you?" In all honesty, people (here anyways) would take you a little more seriously if you didn't blatantly ignore basic English grammar and spelling rules. Maybe get firefox. it has a built in spellcheck, which could help you break this nasty little habit 
also, is kike, or unkikeable a word? Half of that didn't make much sense. I would suggest not using as many expletives, as it's very to make yourself sound like a middle-schooler who just learned some naughty words, if you don't learn how to use them correctly. I don't mind the swearing, I could honestly care less, but it gets to the point where all intelligibility is lost when every other word is some derivative of 'bitch' or 'fuck'.
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04-21-2008, 11:02 PM
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#5 | | Let's do it, a-break it down!
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kike is a derogatory term for a jewish person
kinda like chink for a chinese person or spic for a mexican person
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04-21-2008, 11:11 PM
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#6 | | DANCE FLOOR TERRORIST
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Im offended
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04-21-2008, 11:12 PM
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#7 | | //bemanistyle::[Member]
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Yep. I am not offended by even though I am 1/4 Jewish...
EDIT: Changed lyrics just for The Chemist
But I was completely unaware it was a racial slur... I thought it was another name for a Jew.
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04-22-2008, 10:25 AM
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#8 | | .: Trance Music :.
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Originally Posted by Tetris But I was completely unaware it was a racial slur... I thought it was another name for a Jew. | what?
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Originally Posted by Lukeyboysonic [*]Any incorrect spellings i will automatically change it for you without noticing. This is because people might not understand your posts due to bad spelling and grammar. Please check carefully before you post it. | | |
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04-22-2008, 11:39 AM
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#9 | | Let's do it, a-break it down!
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Originally Posted by Ętheros what? | Kike - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
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04-22-2008, 11:50 AM
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I merely borrowed the line from "They Don't Really Care About Us" by Michael Jackson, because it fit the beat, and it was catchy... Little did I know it was so impacting... But yeah, changed it so I don't get in trouble with the anti-defamation league...
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