Home-made GFDM Images

alvin_bilian · 09-01-2006, 05:47 AM

Taisetsunamono 大切なもの
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Comments please!

Angelic Clock · 09-02-2006, 01:18 AM

Overall is quite nice. The character position really fits the image of the song. But there are things can be improved.

The text. I think the colour usage is a bit awkward. Perhaps adding stroke would be better?

Also the background, there is a clear "boundary line" between the blue and the orange. If you can blend those colours so they fuse smoothly, I think it would look better somewhat.

But again, that's only my two cents. =P

alvin_bilian · 09-02-2006, 04:51 AM

There u go, fixed! But maybe dont looks like u wanted. I just fixed the background & the text simply just blured them.
U can see the fixed images result in my above post, i updated it.
anyway, thanx for ur comment, waiting so long for 1 comment.

more images will coming soon.
BTW, i wanna see everyone's images too if possible, so please post it here if somebody has one like mine too

Sukunai Kitsune · 09-05-2006, 08:00 PM

My only real issue with it is the lines on the neck look a little odd. Almost wrinkly. I would either add more or take some away and have maybe one to show the bend in skin.

alvin_bilian · 09-06-2006, 05:07 AM

yeah, but thats the real image i take from its video.
i prefer more lines than that one.
but i think thats not as bad as i think.

anyway thanx for ur comment!