Your overall style is very nice, but from an animation standpoint it's lacking quite a bit. As phillipio said, the fades are way too frequent, and the music doesn't fit with the content well.
Almost the entire flash consisted of motion-tweened still images, which really grated on me, using keyframed animation is really important when trying to convey action correctly. Take notes from the flashes by Sam Bak Za (There She Is!!, etc.) if you're looking for ideas on how to create fluid animation in Flash. Your style of animation is very much Japanese-influenced, so if you really want to push your work in that area, study action scenes from as many Japanese-created works as you can find. You can never find enough source material when it comes to self-improvement.
Last edited by Trick : 06-18-2006 at 02:31 AM.
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My animation -Ballad Inure- 
