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Boss fight (w.i.p)
Old 06-12-2007, 09:01 PM   #1
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Well guys i just made this earlier and as you read at the title, its a W.I.P. I'd like to know your guys/girls thoughts about how to improve it. Thanks!
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Old 06-19-2007, 12:25 PM   #2
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Aight, lets see here.

Ahh ok so your going for an orchestral boss battle type song.

I think you should fix that timpani run at the beginning. Something about it seems off. Too much interference with eachother. Might just need a good EQing.

that thing that I believe is supposed to sound like a trumpet. (during 1:10).. doesnt XD. Try and get a better sound out of it.

To be honest, It sound more like one of those scenes right before a boss battle. Where its all epic, and the good guy and the bad guy are yelling things at eachother XD. "GIVE ME BACK MY LAND!" " NEVER!!!!"

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Old 06-19-2007, 01:25 PM   #3
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I'm inclined to agree with SBX- this sounds more like lead-up to boss music than boss music. I like your melodic ideas, but it (somewhat) lacks complexity. It could also benefit from EQ and better sample/Virtual instrument choice. certainly not bad though.
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Old 06-22-2007, 03:35 AM   #4
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The sticatto sounds like it's cutting itself off, perhaps it's just a bad sample. I think the snare should be more symphonic sounding, practice with making one sample sound like it's being played by an orchestra:

Layer many notes over eachother and alter the time at which they're hit slightly, the pitch, the velocity, the panning, the offset, and add a few to a lower octave.

Other than that, the production quality is good, but it's too short of a song.
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