The sticatto sounds like it's cutting itself off, perhaps it's just a bad sample. I think the snare should be more symphonic sounding, practice with making one sample sound like it's being played by an orchestra:
Layer many notes over eachother and alter the time at which they're hit slightly, the pitch, the velocity, the panning, the offset, and add a few to a lower octave.
Other than that, the production quality is good, but it's too short of a song. |