Canonized == New version (might enter in DDR contest)

[helix eternal]

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=937238&T=2389

Okay this is the new version of Canonized.

Things I did:
Stripped down a lot of the instrumentation so that it wasn't so messy
Fixed the main melody so it was correct to the original song, but I had to add in a little bit at the end because it was only 14 bars instead of 16 or something like that
Added in bells, but I'm not entirely fond of the bell sample i used so I'm getting a different one, just imagine the bells sounding like awesome church bells
fixed up the kick drum so it's bangin
fixed up the stereo imaging so the song sounded wider and more full

Any thoughts or comments? I'm seriously thinking about entering this in the DDR song contest.

[Jeremy Lim]

I think the harmonizing is still a bit off around 1:40 ..

[helix eternal]

Updated the mix, bells sound better now:
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?pid=937238&T=1569

[Ætheros]

IF this doesn't make it to DDR (which i doubt) can i step this 4 stepmix?

[helix eternal]

Originally Posted by diggit_6

IF this doesn't make it to DDR (which i doubt) can i step this 4 stepmix?

did you mean you doubt if it would make it into ddr or you think that it would make it?

[Ætheros]

i doubt that it won't make it into DDR. It's really good and has alot of potential for good steps. I think it'll do well.

[DjMeas]

He's trying to say you're a girl ^_* lol j/k

All in All, pretty solid track with good stepping potential!

[helix eternal]

Okay
Uploaded what I think will be the final version of the song. I cleaned it up a lot (with RedRebel's helpful insights, hey!)

Canonized (H-Corps Mix), created by Helix Eternal and presented through ACIDplanet.com

DDR-worthy?