ClimaX (for StepMix) - Infinity Project

[Ætheros]

ClimaX (StepMix Version), created by Infinity Project and presented through ACIDplanet.com
My newest Euro Dance/Trance song under my Infinity Project Alias. please review.

[Ætheros]

So i take it no one really cares? c'mon people. 14 views and no posts? i suppose i may be alittle impatient, but i never seem to get any feedback at all.

[Enoch-Fox]

Don't be a whiner. You're asking for critiques, ASKING for people to do something, it's not some kind of service provided to you, it's a message board, so don't expect instant gratification.

Critique: Suggest delay. You need delay. Lots. LOTS. the beginning would be so atmospheric with some delay on that piano and the lower beep. Ok, the beep is changing into a different synth now, which is a much less interesting synth. You need something on the upbeats for this to be really dancey... some kind of hi-hat? I dunno. Can't hear the piano anymore. I'd use a snare too where you've got a clap right now... The ending is super abrupt and sounds more like it ought to have been a breakdown... it's not the right sort of context for an ending, it's like asking someone "Hey, What is" and then walking away. Seems like there needs to be some resolution to that part of the song. Anyway, use effects. Delay on the beginning will make it cool, and you should probably do something to amp up the middle section (detune a bit? add the hats definitely).

EDIT: For a song called "Climax" there really isn't any. It's a much more chill song than that name suggests.

[DjMeas]

Everything Dr said is right on the pin head. It's a pretty mellow track with almost an asian feel to it (the melody gives me this feeling). It's not terrible, but it can really use a lot of work. It's just not heavy/hard enough~ I don't really feel like dancing to this track at all. I can picture myself waking up though for some odd reason (that's the imagery i get ^_^'').

[aether]

Listening from a laptop ... I like the melody, but I can't say too much for the rest of it. I'd go with a synth instead of .. what I THINK is an organ.

Where is it that you're trying to go with this song? If you're going for atmosphere, Dr 1010 is all over it. Delay, my friend. Some light reverb. Maybe some bells, or tiny ambient gated blips to replace that organ.

And for the record, I think I've only broken 10 posts in one of my threads three or four times. Sometimes there isn't a whole lot to say about the song, or people can't think of stuff and whatever.

It might be a good thing!