Dr1010 New WIP - *???*

Enoch-Fox · 09-14-2006, 07:03 PM

So I decided to try making a kinda hardcoreish song, which is something I've never really had much success with. This time, however, I came up with something I really quite like.

I think I'm probably gonna call it "end."

The instruments are terrible right now because I don't have much to work with for this genre. If anyone has advice on either where to get something that sounds better (for free, I'm poor), or how to make what I have sound better, please don't hesitate.

The melody is a ripoff of Transmissionary Position by me, which was a ripoff of Transmissionary by privates (a rock band), which was a ripoff of The Trooper by Iron Maiden. You probably can't hear it though because it's changed so much in-between.

EDIT: I forgot my link.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4439188

EDIT2: Updated version with better instruments and a couple fun tricks.

**helix eternal** · 09-16-2006, 10:41 AM

I dig it. The instruments sound decent, but they need to be more full. 9/10

jihnsius · 09-22-2006, 02:09 PM

Nice percussion.
The bass sounds like it's panned all the way out into stereo, which is a terrible idea. The melodies are nice, but it seems like the synths you're using (or just the panning of them) seems to make it not as nice as it could be. I don't know what it is, but this song could be a lot better with just a few small changes to the synths to make them fit better.