Dr1010 noo song - Altered Layer (Depth Charge Mix)

[Enoch-Fox]

It's on my soundclick at here: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4364364

I dunno. I liked it. I work with FL, tell me how to get bettur moar :P Always lookin for help improving. Specific C&Cs are appreciated more than "I liked it" or "This suckusu." Thanks please.

EDIT: I just realized I don't appreciate my own critique of my song at all. I'm a bastard.

[x0_000]

I think it should have a breakdown midsong, right now it's a bit stale carrying the same melody with background additions. Maybe layer another synth/add more jungle-ish drums mid song and play around with the melody a bit.