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[Drum 'n' Bass/holy shit] Phosphorus
Old 06-30-2008, 02:57 AM   #1
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just started this today and i wanted to give you guys a taste. this is the most aggressive track i have ever done, and when i say aggressive i meant it. this thing is sadistic.

still pretty early, not too much atmo yet, got some leveling issues but nothing too bad. song title may be a placeholder, enjoy

phosphorus.mp3

edit: fixed with current ver.
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Old 06-30-2008, 08:01 PM   #2
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Dear Edumondodedaiiienichichichido:

You're getting too good to fast.

Suggestion: the whistling ... maybe not have it quantized with everything in the breakdown? If it's a little sloppier, it sounds a bit creepier.

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Old 06-30-2008, 10:06 PM   #3
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this is fuckin sick kid

agreeing something needs to be done to the "whistling" sound though, needs like some distortion or something on it to warble it and make it sound creepier. Detuning it a little could help too.
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Old 06-30-2008, 10:38 PM   #4
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your good with drums, you gotta send me a midi or something to show off dem skill. This is scary shit. But yeah, distort the whistling or something and I'll listen to this when im on lSD.
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Old 07-01-2008, 10:36 AM   #5
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You definitely need to finish this. It's very nice. =3
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Old 07-01-2008, 03:38 PM   #6
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I haven't listened to this, but the second its done, send a PM over. I still listen to Gemini
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Old 07-05-2008, 07:48 PM   #7
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phosphorus.mp3

90% final version. if anything else changes it wont be major.
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Old 07-06-2008, 01:09 AM   #8
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I hate you for being awesome, Edmoneichichichicdochinomnomnom.
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Old 07-06-2008, 12:45 PM   #9
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Well. to be honest I havent listened to anything of yours for a good while, so lets see here.

hmm.. by your description, I was expecting something.. a little faster?.. lol for some reason this just sounds slightly too slow for what I was expecing :P.

Where did you get those metallic sounds by the way?

Pretty good though. You are getting good fast :P.. damn too many people are doing that these days lol.
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Old 07-06-2008, 02:43 PM   #10
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you need some screaming babies.

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Old 07-06-2008, 04:10 PM   #11
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Where did you get those metallic sounds by the way?
where i get all my samples. google =D
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Where are your sines???
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