Field of Snow (revised)

KgZ · 02-21-2008, 10:03 AM

This is a revision of my song Field of Snow, as I'm going to submit it into the DDR broadjam 2008 contest.

I would like any sort of criticism or suggestions of any kind, even the smallest ones. I really want this to be perfect.

MacJams.com - Song: Field of Snow by KgZ

Eshmasesh · 02-21-2008, 11:11 AM

Really pretty piano work :3

patrickphan2 · 02-21-2008, 01:01 PM

i like your melodies but your piano seems kinda low quality-ish. Nice piano work. ITS LIKE A BEAUTIFUL SNOWY EVENING THEN COMES THE BLIZZARD! Good Luck with the contest.

WEABOO · 02-21-2008, 02:01 PM

I love the pad/string work, but the piano work that runs through the first half of the song gets really annoying imo. It strikes really hard and has this ackward bouncy-ness to it. Afterwards though, very nice. Your ending is beautiful.

sylcmyk+ · 02-22-2008, 12:25 AM

the simplicity of it just makes it so ripe to listen to. Coincidence, it's snowing at the moment too.

KgZ · 02-22-2008, 08:45 AM

Yeah, I can see why some people might not like the piano, I'll try to EQ it better.

Thanks for all of the feedback everyone