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Old 04-08-2007, 03:41 AM   #1
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It's been a while since I made some music, so here's something. Feel free to listen and critique. This is currently WIP, and most is often inspired by a chiptune called TからSへ. Just tell me what to improve and I'll improve.
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turn down the volume on the high-hat a bit in the opening part. It kind of fights with the piano in terms of attention.

Other than that I dig this.
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Old 04-08-2007, 03:32 PM   #3
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everything is sweet except your drums snares, hats and yeah. Percussion.
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Should I rather take out the fast distortion (or at least tone it down) for the drums? I used Fast Dist on the drums, and I wasn't sure if it did fit in correctly. I blame Mars Matrix for this.
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The only way I'll ever buy a PS3 is when UHDV comes out. Then while other people doze to another reality with their 130" UHDTVs, that will then be the time when I'm holding the SIXAXIS.

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Old 04-09-2007, 03:56 AM   #5
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Wow

These melodies are gorgeous. Gorgeous.

Turn down the hi hat, add more oomph to that kick, turn up the overall volume, and you have a gorgeous song.

Seriously, my ears thank you.
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Thanks! The melodies are inspired by TからSへ, the song (chiptune) which about half of this song derives from.

Looks like I have a lot of undoing to do. I've added some parts into it, and I'm not really sure whether to keep them or not.
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