第一曲 - First Song

BemaniJhoto 7.5 · 04-08-2007, 03:41 AM

第一曲 - First Song

It's been a while since I made some music, so here's something. Feel free to listen and critique. This is currently WIP, and most is often inspired by a chiptune called TからSへ. Just tell me what to improve and I'll improve.

misterCQNZR · 04-08-2007, 02:08 PM

turn down the volume on the high-hat a bit in the opening part. It kind of fights with the piano in terms of attention.

Other than that I dig this.

patrickphan2 · 04-08-2007, 03:32 PM

everything is sweet except your drums snares, hats and yeah. Percussion.

BemaniJhoto 7.5 · 04-08-2007, 04:51 PM

Should I rather take out the fast distortion (or at least tone it down) for the drums? I used Fast Dist on the drums, and I wasn't sure if it did fit in correctly. I blame Mars Matrix for this.

WEABOO · 04-09-2007, 03:56 AM

Wow

These melodies are gorgeous. Gorgeous.

Turn down the hi hat, add more oomph to that kick, turn up the overall volume, and you have a gorgeous song.

Seriously, my ears thank you.

BemaniJhoto 7.5 · 04-09-2007, 11:15 AM

Thanks! The melodies are inspired by TからSへ, the song (chiptune) which about half of this song derives from.

Looks like I have a lot of undoing to do. I've added some parts into it, and I'm not really sure whether to keep them or not.