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Gravity ~Energy Mix~
Old 06-19-2007, 03:50 AM   #1
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I finally came out of my long slump and created something worth posting on here. Tell me what you think. It's a little bit on the short side, but I figured I'd rather it be short than long and repetitive.

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The only song on there.
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Old 06-19-2007, 08:31 AM   #2
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Sounds really good, but there's something about that ascending melody that plays first around 1:06 that doesn't sound quite right to me.
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Old 06-19-2007, 10:27 AM   #3
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It's funny because I love that bit! Sure, it's very different to the other parts of the song but it's still awesome I rate 8.5/10
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Old 06-19-2007, 12:04 PM   #4
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k wait, is this supposed to be a remix of gravity or an original? Kinda in the same style XD.

Anyways. I really like it. The drums are really sweet. It sounds a little overcompressed though I think. I'm not exactly sure, but it sounds like there is something muffleing it a bit.

o.O nice strings.

Nice work man!
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Old 06-19-2007, 01:08 PM   #5
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This definitely gets a thumbs up. sounds good, especially good synth choice and amazing strings
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Old 06-22-2007, 03:37 AM   #6
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Great work. I'd suggest a lot more percussive or filter variance to make it sounds more TaQesque.
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Old 06-23-2007, 04:19 PM   #7
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Sounds really good, but there's something about that ascending melody that plays first around 1:06 that doesn't sound quite right to me.
It is slightly off.. but yeah.

Overall, incredible song.
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Old 06-27-2007, 05:16 AM   #8
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Thanks for the feedback guys.
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Old 07-01-2007, 08:25 PM   #9
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I enjoyed the strings in the song, they really gave it a nice environment and emotion.

The only thing that sounded a bit off was around 1:10 (I think helix pointed this out as well), with the quick synth hits.

Overall though, good job.
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