holy shit im back with 2 songs

[CRH]

Did some songs with my friend eliot who is slowly getting better at the guitar..,

Mirage : http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=47738

Énergie : http://www.icompositions.com/music/song.php?sid=47799

You can download the songs, it's free, you don't need to sign up.

Tell me what you guys think about those.

[DjMeas]

DUDE, talk about a vacation ^_^ long time no see buddy!

totally LOVED Mirage (even though i wish it were longer!). Great sound!
Guitar and Organ is such a great combo (kind of like Uematsu and
the Black Mages). So the guitar is recorded live? It sounds really nice.
Can't really say anymore besides that it's pretty sweet~ make a longer one ^_*

[Slarty]

Regarding Mirage:

Is it me or do I hear skips every 4 bars?

It's cool but sounds like a generic song for guitarfreaks 3rd mix or something.

[Beer Can]

Whee! Updated version of Mirage! Nice.

Energie: Synth/Guitar duel! YES! Very nice.

Big thing I noticed was that the recording quality this time seemed better than previous songs. What happened there?

Otherwise, keep kicking ass. Please. We need more of your stuff.

[Vospi]

Yay 2 CRH!

Energie: fight song, eh? I feel like it's mood would fit Bloody Roar series.
Mirage: this one reminds me of S.S.H. Nice polyrhytmic here

You have such a great material and just REFUSE to work on your sound. All is clipping like a hell. Guitar riff in the Energie intro is not very precise and have some white noise added. Synth sound is not "with the mix" Everything named above can be fixed... Please try to solve this problems, mainly the clipping.

Besides, you are one of the best here, I really like the way your music goes. Keep it up!

[CRH]

Originally Posted by SirSlarty

Regarding Mirage:

Is it me or do I hear skips every 4 bars?

lol, it's called 7/8

hahaha

[oni-ice]

Comments from me and my friends:

Energie sounded like those kind of random jamming of indie metal bands. Way too short. Without the bass intro and the delay at the end, it made me feel that it is made to be looped. Needs more content for an intro and ending. It didn't quite "tell me anything".

Mirage: Typical Yngwie, I think there's too much shreds in the song. Then, it gets boring after listening a few times. Try to vary here and there. Just that we prefer more DT than Yngwie, haha. =)

p.s Both songs are mixed very well though. Keep it up.

[CRH]

Too much shred ? I mean, there's like 1 part where Eliot does a guitar fast run. I mean, the rest is nothing technical, I focussed on the whole atmosphere and sound of it. The rest is a more like a mix between ELP and Liquid Tension Experiment imo.

Still...NOTHING like Yngwie.... yngwie is fucking horrible music

[oni-ice]

Originally Posted by CRH

Too much shred ? I mean, there's like 1 part where Eliot does a guitar fast run. I mean, the rest is nothing technical, I focussed on the whole atmosphere and sound of it. The rest is a more like a mix between ELP and Liquid Tension Experiment imo.

Still...NOTHING like Yngwie.... yngwie is fucking horrible music

Sorry about that.

And yes, I agree. Yngwie is fucking horrible music.