MEAN MACHINE

tomokosasaki · 06-16-2007, 10:45 AM

A new original tune! Not EQ'd yet

MEAN MACHINE.mp3

DJ SymBiotiX · 06-19-2007, 12:23 PM

o.O I like the ideas behind this. I feel like there is one off note in the beginning melody. It might just be me. But when that other counter melody collides and theres layers, alot of it seems slightly off here and there :S.

I really do enjoy the song though. Its got this... megaman remix feel to it :P.

Nice!

tomokosasaki · 06-20-2007, 07:11 PM

Could you tell me the part you feel it's off?

I tried to use many many melodies at once and still get them working in harmony..@_@

jihnsius · 06-22-2007, 03:25 AM

Great melodies. Could use some EQ tweaks here and there to clean it up. Also, consider compression at the climax, seems a bit muddled. Is that bass a sample? Sounds kinda iffy at higher notes, but it might just be me. I like the fills you did, they're awesome.

Overall, great work, could use some cleaning up, though.

tomokosasaki · 06-22-2007, 05:39 AM

hi
yeah the bass is sampled, i guess it does sound a little weird at higher notes, i should find a longer sample.
i'll try and fix some of the other problems ltonight

jihnsius · 06-22-2007, 05:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tomokosasaki

hi
yeah the bass is sampled, i guess it does sound a little weird at higher notes, i should find a longer sample.
i'll try and fix some of the other problems ltonight

Or try to synthesize it. I'd go with monomate (freeware) for trying to get that same sound.