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Old 11-24-2006, 08:36 PM   #1
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Rainbow Flyer -Betancourt Remix-
dj TAKA remixed by Betancourt




Contains samples from the following songs:

Rainbow Flyer :: dj TAKA
RISLIM :: Ric
Lower World :: D.J. SETUP
Gigadelic :: Teranoid feat. MC Natsack


Im looking for real criticism guys. Help me better myself. Thanks everyone.

PS: I just finished the song, so several parts may need some polishing. I just want to see what you guys think of the initial remix.
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Old 11-24-2006, 09:05 PM   #2
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I think you should speed it up a bit. The beginning is really slow and repetitive and then at 1:04 it seems like you are going to change it up a bit, and it really doesn't... I was expecting something like 1:47 up around 1:04.

Overall though, it's a bit slow and repetitive.
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I think you should speed it up a bit. The beginning is really slow and repetitive and then at 1:04 it seems like you are going to change it up a bit, and it really doesn't... I was expecting something like 1:47 up around 1:04.

Overall though, it's a bit slow and repetitive.
Hm...yeah I think I can see what you mean...I uploaded a different file thats a bit more clean but overall its the same.

I appreciate the feedback dude
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Old 11-27-2006, 08:05 AM   #4
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Where can I hear the original song?
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Old 11-27-2006, 09:14 AM   #5
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