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vary your percussion... you have a hat sometimes that I can hear but there should be more. Listen to what the percussion sounds like in most trancey songs... this song seems to end in the middle of a measure, on a very open cadence. What this means, is the listener will basically hum the last half of your measure for you. The solution is to go ahead and put it in the song because otherwise your ending will still seem open. Do you fool around with chorus and distortion and other effects like at all? i think some chorus and distortion (lightly) on that lead could make it sound a lot better and more full. But you keep getting better, so keep working on it :3
Further advice: Hang on to all your old flps because in the future you can look to them for inspiration. Can't tell you how many times I've come back to a melody from an old file with some new thing I've learned and made a much better song.
Last edited by Dr_1010 : 03-16-2007 at 11:56 AM.
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New song from AEtheros, Untitled (WIP) 
