New song from Infinity Project, Delerium (WIP Demo)

[Ætheros]

please check out my new song. I'm going to extend it, increase quality, add vocals, and make it more awexome, but i need feddbackmore than anything. I'm quite proud of what I have so far, (although at about 1:10, it makes the shittiest transition evar). so ja. check it out.
Delerium (WIP Demo), created by Infinity Project and presented through ACIDplanet.com

[Enoch-Fox]

Delirium*

it sounds not at all really delirious... i don't like your pad at the beginning... after that it gets better... you're right that is a terrible transition. Where is your percussion. Why is it hiding. Bring it out, add more of it, you need more than just a kick. Compress it or something, make it punch.

Oh, and your ending was... not one. Give the song a real ending. And add percussion. Melodies were cool though.

[Ætheros]

i am horrible at endings, which is why it takes me so long to get a good one, which is why good endings only appear in full length version V.V
Also, as for the percussion, it will be louder. I actually put it the loudest i oculd, and then quieted everything else down and it's still too soft. And that transision will take time. i'm think maybe a whooshing pad, like if it was a DDR song, it'd be a freeze and the BPM would accelerate to like 5x and then slow down to the 8th triplets speed. Also, have you heard Resistance yet? i kinda need to work the intro a little bit, but ima remix that one soon.

[DjMeas]

There's qiute a bit of clipping on my end. The track at 1:20, the synths really over-power everything. The idea itself isn't bad, but there's a lot more you'd have to add to the track to make it more appealing.

Keep it up! You're definitely getting somewhere with this.

[Ætheros]

yeah, I'm going to level out the volumes, change/add.remove effects, and finally add in some lyrics. I wonder what the main lyric will be...also, does anybody know how to make it so the drums don't cut out parts of the synths (I'm assuming thats what you mean by 'clipping')

[helix eternal]

Originally Posted by diggit_6

yeah, I'm going to level out the volumes, change/add.remove effects, and finally add in some lyrics. I wonder what the main lyric will be...also, does anybody know how to make it so the drums don't cut out parts of the synths (I'm assuming thats what you mean by 'clipping')

clipping is when the sound passes above the 0.0 db mark on the master volume and causes distortion/sound loss

look at your main mixer (i think you use reason right?)
if the master channel is filling up into the red area and especially if it is touching the top, you are clipping
you can reduce the volume of your instruments/samples or the main volume to reduce/remove clipping

[Enoch-Fox]

and then use COMPREXSSSSSSDUSOIDUOSU
compression
compression
to fill out so it's not quiet
but not too much or it sounds like dongs

[Ætheros]

Okay. What is with all of this 'Dong' business. was i offline the day everyone on the internet decided it'd be fun to start a new inside joke?

[Enoch-Fox]

an inside your mom joke

sorry

that was uncalled for

In reality, the situation you stated above is exactly what happenned. Leapyears don't exist, that's just the day you lapse into a coma three out of every four years and we decide not to tell you.