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Originally Posted by DJ SymBiotiX I started this song yesterday. Basically the story behind the progression, is that something really bad happened in this persons life, and this then decides to just look forward and never back, but while he is looking forward, you still hear parts of his past still in the back of his mind.
yup there is a story behind this lol.
Anyways check it out. Starts off kind of dark, then everything kind of picks up. Though at the very end it slows down again for one last little look behind XD. DJ SymBiotiX - Never Look Back
what do you guys think? |
Okay, I'll be the bad guy and give the critiques, then.
For some reason, and I've noticed this across a number of your tracks, the percussion comes off almost overwhelming. Here, especially around 1:45, the hat seems especially loud. Earlier in the track, it was the bass drum. For this song, though, it feels like the melody should drive the track instead. And it is an excellent melody, so let it shine through a bit more!
Don't get me wrong... as before, I do like it, and you've done some excellent writing here. It's just that I'm having trouble getting over the overwhelming percussion.
On more of a side note, to think that this song was written by the same guy who did Splash Beats... it shows that you've made a lot of progress! Keep up the awesome work!
