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Old 08-06-2008, 10:30 AM   #1
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DEMO I recorded recently.

It's NOWHERE near done but I figure I'd share what I've been making since the completion of my studio.

I love it, you?
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Old 08-06-2008, 11:32 AM   #2
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This will be your artist thread, just letting you know, so eventually if you want me to change the thread title just PM me. If you make another thread to promote a song they will be merged, as per the new rules


LOL Konami demo XD

You have some interesting sounds going on here. Some of the stuff seems off-key with the bass, particularly the first synth that comes in. I'm diggin the groove though, I'd like to hear it when it's more complete and polished.
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The bass is out of key

What you have for the bass line is: B C# G G#

To stay in key, what you should have is: B C# F# G#

Your arp is also out of key, as is a lot of other instruments. Try following the key of the song when you write your synths.

Overall the ideas are there, but you definitely are gonna have to sit down and spend a good amount of time getting everything to actually harmonize together.
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The bass is out of key

What you have for the bass line is: B C# G G#

To stay in key, what you should have is: B C# F# G#

Your arp is also out of key, as is a lot of other instruments. Try following the key of the song when you write your synths.

Overall the ideas are there, but you definitely are gonna have to sit down and spend a good amount of time getting everything to actually harmonize together.
Oh, oh I see!
Well that's a problem that should thankfully be easy to fix.
But to be honest, I am a little rusty on keys.

It is only a demo, so thank god there's PLENTY of room for improvement.
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