I see you opted for the "puzzle" theme instead.
I'll take what I said before and make it public: it's perfect for what it's intended for. It's well put together. It's like you had a vision for it and you executed perfectly, which is great for what you're aiming for in the future. You can definitely take something, and write music for it. I'm quite jealous.
Two things though, both relating to drums
1) The hi hat as it is is a bit .. meh. It's just there, and it's tick-tick-tick-tick .. not sure you'd really want to change that, but it's sort of prominent. Maybe a bit softer would help? Mind you, that could be a completely personal thing.
2) Would you consider trying a different drum pattern? Nothing wrong with the one you have now, but I could see a funky beat working too.
Beyond that, it's great. I'd like you to write me a theme song one day. |