Comments and criticism. Love the gated synth and the bass.
This sounds really good, but it's only downfall is that it's kind of generic. There's a sound that reminds me of one of those little $1 piano things you can get at a dollar store or something, that's original. I'm not sure I really like the sound though, maybe it could use to be spread out more in the stereo field and use softer reverb, either that or more/different delay effect on it.
Also, at least on the hi-fi stream on soundclick, it sounds a bit overcompressed from 3:41-3:48. Unless it is supposed to be side-chained, the kick overpowers everything else and makes it sound a little mucky. Same problem right at the end. I'm not too fond of the end how it does a kick roll and a sound effect =/ It makes the ending sound forced, like you didn't really know how or where to actually end it.
Don't take my criticisms too harshly. I'm not quite as good a producer as you, I'm still learning. I'm just trying to suggest solutions to things that I personally feel are problematic, though others might not even notice these things.
Overall it's a well done track, the synths sound good, the drums sound pretty good too. I'd give it a 9/10.
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