Short little loop, need opinions

[Arctures]

I have been working on it for some time, but for about a month work on it has just stopped. I really need to know if this is good enough to continue work on; if it is I will need someone to do vocals (worst comes to worst, I will do them myself).
yousendit link to the song is here
I am currently using it as a loop for my keymania, it loops fine I'd say. Please give me comments, I am in a huge slump right now and I need a boost.

[Victamone]

Holy cow. I like it arkie. Keep the progress up. I just found myself a new ringtone.

[babbagamp shramp camp]

This is quite good, sir!
I must say that it feels a little right-heavy, though. Pan a few things over to the left (the piano would be good, I think) and balance it out a little. Perhaps add a few more hihats, but that's not entirely necessary.

[jihnsius]

The kick and hat don't suit it well, and the bass sounds a little muddy. I think the main synth you have going on should be stereo separated a tad, and panned either right or left, having the piano panned the other direction.

It sounds great, though. Keep it up. I don't think it needs vocals at all!

[DjMeas]

Totally love it! Sounds very "Select a song" ish hahah! Which is a good thing!

Very nice!

[Beer Can]

Me like.

The imagery I'm getting is like the movement patterns you get by chaotically mixing water (like Jacuzzi jet style). It seems chaotic, yet it manages to flow without tripping over itself.

I wouldn't mind seeing this as an expanded song, really. My only criticism is that the kick could hit a little harder. It seems slightly lost in the sound of the other instruments.