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Old 05-25-2007, 11:14 PM   #1
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Alright, so whilst messing with my piano today, I came across an uplifting little ditty. I wanted to make a happy tribal song, which I started, but it wasnt turning out so well (I suck at tribal), so I started a happy trance version as well. Now I'm wondering, which do you think has more potential (kind of scared to ask this since Ive expanded a good amount on the trance one already)

anyways yea, what do you guys think? Maybe I should just make 2 versions?

EDIT: Ok, so Ive expanded both a bit. Check em out.

DJ SymBiotiX - Radient Sky (Jungle Paradise Mix)
DJ SymBiotiX - Radient Sky (Till The Break Of Dawn Mix)
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Old 05-27-2007, 10:59 PM   #2
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I hate that bell sound that starts at the beginning of the song in the jungle paradise mix but I love the rest of the percussion. Then that flute-ish thing sounds out of tune or something, maybe it's the way the instrument sounds, but I don't like it.

I like the kind of trip-hop/lounge feel the Till the Break of Dawn Mix has. If you played around with the drumline in it, made it sound more like natural drums (possibly just use a loop and chop it) but I like it a lot better than the other mix. I think you should expand on this one.
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It's a marimba, helix. I don't particularly love that exact sample, but its certainly not bad. Helix is right about the flute though, it's pitched down a semitone from the rest of your piece. I kept on wanting something to happen in this mix, and it just.... didn't. Not bad, but not exactly my cup of tea. I'd love to have heard some heavy breakbeat type drums at like 70bpm in the middle of this, but they aren't there, so I'll have to say that its alright, but not as good as it could be.

as for the ttbodm, helix is right once again- your percussion lines need a bit of work to sound more realistic. Apart from that, I'd have to say, this is deffinitely the superior mix. have fun with it.
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