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Old 05-21-2007, 04:32 PM   #1
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new techno song for my upcoming album
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Old 05-21-2007, 07:18 PM   #2
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for some reason I can't download tracks from your acidplanet, this option is disabled.
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Old 05-21-2007, 08:02 PM   #3
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As I said before, your best production/track to date. You should be proud of yourself dude.
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Old 05-21-2007, 11:07 PM   #4
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for some reason I can't download tracks from your acidplanet, this option is disabled.
I keep forgetting to upload the mp3 and enabling download
I'll do that soon.
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Old 05-22-2007, 02:28 AM   #5
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Had a very brief listen - literally skipped through the song.

Production is nice from what I can tell with these speakers. I think you could use a different bass synth and the closed hi hats are a bit strong .. but once again, could just be my speakers.

You've built this really nice industrial atmosphere.. I loved how you opened it.

Can't say I'm a big fan of the drum roll at 3:40 .. or what happens after that. You crushed the industrial atmosphere, man! It's all hardcore, and then it goes .. major? How come?
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Old 05-22-2007, 08:21 AM   #6
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Can't say I'm a big fan of the drum roll at 3:40 .. or what happens after that. You crushed the industrial atmosphere, man! It's all hardcore, and then it goes .. major? How come?
It's supposed to have that effect, going from minor to major, making it sound dark at first and then light at the end.
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Old 05-22-2007, 11:18 AM   #7
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Very Interesting. I like it.
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Old 05-22-2007, 03:23 PM   #8
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Thanks yo

I updated the mix so the levels are more balanced and it doesn't sound so overcompressed, check the first post for linkage
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Old 05-22-2007, 05:10 PM   #9
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It's supposed to have that effect, going from minor to major, making it sound dark at first and then light at the end.
In which case, it works. Haha.
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Old 05-23-2007, 04:15 PM   #10
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A+ + +.

great stuff, thoroughly well produced.
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Old 05-31-2007, 06:38 PM   #11
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listened to both versions, second one was much better.

some parts of the song felt empty, and personally i don't like fill that you did on 03:05, it just doesn't feel expressive. basically, not my music style, but that sounded almost great! keep up the good work, please.
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