listened to both versions, second one was much better.
some parts of the song felt empty, and personally i don't like fill that you did on 03:05, it just doesn't feel expressive. basically, not my music style, but that sounded almost great! keep up the good work, please.
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music and SM/IIDX/Pump simfiles are there
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