1-Very interesting stuff, I like the rhythmic nature of the synth. that you used on your saw, however, I will say, that I do think it comes in a little overfiltered. Also, your 4-on-the-floor beat that you bring in comes feels like its out of sync with the lead synth- like it comes in on the second measure instead of the first. same thing happens when you bring in a lesser extent. Could be because I'm hearing notes that you use as pickups and hearing them as if they were the start of the melodic progression. altogether, not bad at all.
2- I feel like that moving synth doesn't fit with the others, from the beggining- the inherent bending of it makes it seem offkey. Midway, it splits off into what seems like a completely different song. Which I don't like the beggining movement of the synth for (technically, not melodically). IMO, the first one was better.
In both of them though, as rai says, the bass lacks character.
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