I too, enjoy some of the melodies, but overall, the song lacks coherency. Just because it is written in an alternative time signature does not mean that the beat should be as random as possible. In here, it seems like the beat just does whatever it feels like. Not terrible, though. You also got the piano right for an alternative time-signature song- if it were written in 4/4 it could be done, but it would use a bunch of pickup notes, which are not so much fun to arrange.
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