Whoo! Thesis paragraph ready! Do you guys think this paragraph captures DDR well?
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Originally Posted by LHoT's Health Paper
You see the blinding lights out of the corner of your eyes, keeping your attention on the rising columns. Each and every bass kick seemingly takes your energy. You break for only a second standing on the arrows. Suddenly the music starts again, but this time it’s harder, and faster, and your stepping with the kind of speed that makes world class tap dancers envious. Finally, the kicking bass stops, the crowd cheers, the screen goes black, exhausted, you look at the blank screen in anticipation, the grade shows. You smile and look at the brilliant neon blue colored “AAA” on the screen. Whether you play for the music, or you play for the grade, you also play for the Calorie burning, the high impact cardiovascular workout, and the self-betterment
You see the flashing lights out of the corner of your eyes, keeping your attention on the rising columns. Each and every bass kick seemingly takes your energy. You break for only a second standing on the arrows, and suddenly the music starts again. This time it’s harder, faster, and you're stepping with the kind of speed that makes world class tap dancers envious. Finally, the kicking bass stops, the crowd cheers, and the screen goes black. Exhausted, you look at the blank screen in anticipation. The grade shows. You smile and look at the brilliant neon blue colored “AAA” on the screen. Whether you play for the music, the grade, the Calorie burning, the high impact cardiovascular workout, or the self-betterment, you play.
