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Old 05-15-2007, 09:41 PM   #1
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As in actual critique, not 'zomg lollers naruto 10'd'.

Now see this might be a little touchy because I would -hope- that a lot of people already know about the 'constructive criticism' checkbox that exists on the bottom of every comment box on the simfile.

Basically, what I'm trying to accomplish with this thread is a way to single any given simfile that an author has created out and let the masses go to town on constructively criticizing their simfile. Why, when I just said the first paragraph?

Because 99% of the time, people don't do it, and there are a select few simfile artists out there, myself included, which generally welcome -any- insight into the files that they've made. The only reason I know this is because I -generally- give comments in simfiles that I thought could've been made a little better and act accordingly by telling them exactly -what- could have been better based on my observations, be it right or wrong.

To relieve a bit of stress on having a person just come in here and post ALL of their simfiles at once and to make it to where it's fair, I'd suggest that some seriousness in this thread and limit the feedback to one simfile (until enough criticism has been amassed for one file).

I only make this thread for those that are serious in gaining feedback on their files, not for them to post away and get 'omg lollerz look at diz sim'. Though I have a feeling this may happen anyways, I'm generally offering this out just so it becomes available for those serious artists out there to have the opportunity to put one sim out there for those people to view and get an idea of if they're on the right track with their simfile career or not.

Okay, if you made it this far, here's what I'd wanna see:

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Post what you want looked over and a link to said simfile. (LIMIT ONE UNTIL REVIEWED)

After you do that, you'll get feedback on it from other people that frequent it.

After sufficient amount has been given, then you can do another one.

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So basically this is a 'serious' comments thread. I do this because I know there are many out there dying for such a thing -and- I know for a fact that this is true because I get constant PMs about that when I give feedback in their sims.

If that's all well and good, I'll start off with my own to give everyone else an idea:

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"I need people to take a look at an under-hit simfile by the name of Omniphilia (Rama Gardens 2.0). It's a follow-up to 1.5 and I was really wondering what people thought of it from a Marathon standpoint of view. I realize that not a lot of people like those, so that's why I'm throwing that out there - for feedback."

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That's all. The rest is just getting more things back from the serious simmers and getting more things to look at to kind of generate some activity in 'simfiles to point out for critiquing'.

OF COURSE, this all stems on moderator allowance. I would think that the reasons I've stated are for the right reasons, but it's all a matter of a moderator saying 'oh well that's what comments are for' and defeat my entire purpose. The decision rests then...but hopefully this'll allow for some actual feedback where the comments are usually oppressed to such a thing.
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Old 05-16-2007, 02:24 AM   #2
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Can't say that I'm completely sure that the mods are going to go for this... but sure why not?

Of all of my work, I'm very surprised at how little response Machinae Supremacy - Episode 2 (Trinity) is getting... critique please.
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Old 05-16-2007, 02:04 PM   #3
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edit from Touga: can you repost original message? There was a misconception because a line was hiding. :\ sorry. If there actually was sim advertising then yeah... I'll have to re-correct it; please PM me ASAP
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Old 05-16-2007, 02:44 PM   #4
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Ah...I thought this would be overlooked. Guess there is some interest then.

I'll look over both tonight when I get back from the job. I'll re-edit the post when I get them reviewed.

x - indicates reviewed

[ x ] - Trinity
[ x ] - Ever Free

EDIT: Done. They weren't half bad.
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Old 05-16-2007, 03:01 PM   #5
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nevermind. Kyah i'll have that infraction reversed here shortly. I made a boo-boo.

edit #2: When sending him a file to review. PM IT TO HIM FIRST TO PREVENT MORE CONFUSION!

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Old 05-16-2007, 09:45 PM   #6
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Okay, that does it for the reviews on those two. Appreciate the feed on Omniphilia, Zanaso. You're probably right on the speed jolt sects, but it was to coincide with what I had begun to use with 1.5. Basically I got caught up in gimmick usage but it kinda helps to keep the person awake for five minutes and I felt it didn't lose much in transition. :P
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Old 05-16-2007, 10:27 PM   #7
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Okay, that does it for the reviews on those two. Appreciate the feed on Omniphilia, Zanaso. You're probably right on the speed jolt sects, but it was to coincide with what I had begun to use with 1.5. Basically I got caught up in gimmick usage but it kinda helps to keep the person awake for five minutes and I felt it didn't lose much in transition. :P
You know, honestly the rest of it was fun enough I didn't realize it had been five minutes. LOL

Then again, check my work, and you'll notice it's all long version, I've got some long-ass sims myself. I DO NOT do short versions.

It doesn't lose much in transition IF you're keyboarding it... but padding is a different story. Like I said, it portrays an energy that isn't in the music. But in the end, it definitely shows that you have talent in this area and a great deal of potential... maybe you'd like to work with VirInPro... perhaps make it so that I'm not the only simfile writer in our group? lol

Thanx for the (Trinity) review btw. 'twould be nice if you looked over some of my other works, nice to run into someone that actually leaves a nice bit of information when they comment. If you liked that one, then if I were you I'd check either Scars or Black Magic next :P
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Old 05-19-2007, 03:12 PM   #8
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*looks left* *looks right* you know, this idea shouldn't be dead yet, it's a GOOD IDEA. How about... I drop in a few more just to get things started?

Beck - Clap Hands
Machinae Supremacy - Sidology Episode 1 (Sid Evolution)
DAX - And the Band Played On

I know that your rules are only one at a time, but this needs to take off somehow :P
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